New writer

Hay im new at writing soi would like some comments on how i can improve my poems, i will return thefavor to u :)

For a new writer, you're doing pretty well. :) But the two examples below, where you put the same word at the end of two lines, its a little odd. Try thinking of different words so you aren't repeating yourself.

"We can get through any thing
Just remember one thing:"

"From the very first day I saw you
I new I always wanted to be with you"

Best of wishes!!
Brit