With you

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    that is my new poem. i havent wrote in awhile so if you comment and rate of course I will too. thanks

  • Seronum
    19 years ago

    I read your poem, it was very good. I have made some new ones as well, Im trying to work on a poetry book too and hope to become maybe a poet or something. Take care and hope if you feeling down that you get back up because life is a road it can sometimes lead us in the wrong direction. Take care

  • blueknight
    19 years ago

    done can you please rrc my newest one it is called wear the smilling mask of fallacies

    Thanks

    Geneross

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    kk thanks yall. but i will comment bak tonight i dont have time right now! BUT I WILL DO IT =D

    anyone else?

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    kk i did both of yours. anyone else???

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    kk done hun. thanks. and i absolutely loved your poem.

    anyone else?

  • Goran Rahim
    19 years ago

    me??
    i will do it now

  • Misstress
    19 years ago

    Done.
    It was a good read.

    -Please check out

    'One last Cry'

    Thanks.

  • Sweet lig
    19 years ago

    done and they are all great poems... just check out my poems too pls....thanks and may gob bless u!!

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    kk yall i will do these tonight or when i get home im at school right now and im about to leave. so yeah thanks for the comments and i will do them tonight! =D

    anyone else?

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    kk i cant do them now b/c im not at my house and i wont be there at all this wknd so i will do them when i go home!!!!! PROMISE!

  • John (Mr. Whuppy)
    19 years ago

    I have read your poem and commented

    5/5

    John

    Please read mine

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    OKAY!!! I FINALLY did them ppl. sorry it took so long but i am done. =D

    Anyone else???????

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    There you go sweetie! =P Hehe, take your pick of my latest ones please? Thankss, xx

  • Nelle
    19 years ago

    Done babe =D

    Anyone else?