P & Q

Watch your P's and Q's
by John (Mr. Whuppy)

Here I am tired and bored
sitting in my chair
typing on my laptop
a poem for you to share

Keep poems and quotes forever
then everyone will know
that this is the site that allows you
your P's and Q's to show

Then join a poetry club on here
and get your comments and votes
debate in open discussion
and make some friends we hope

As long as you obey the rules
and keep your comments clean
then you will find a useful place
where all your poems are seen

But don't forget to vote for others
help any way you can
to improve the writing skills
of any woman or man

The chat pages that are on site
are there for all to use
but not for those who want to cyber
to me thats just abuse

Just get on line and you will see
that with the Lords good grace
we all have something we can share
the world then we can face

John

oh my.....

well said john.....

well thanks

please anyone feel free to post a poem about P&Q

Like it!

Awe, that was very well put indeed.

-Jenna.

Hahah, I have no poem, but a little quote.

Welcome to p and q,
Where all your dreams come true!

Nice poem, by the way... very thoughtful.

//T.L.//

BOB
I can relate to that so well your poem is both Funny and true

Hey folks it looks as if Mr Shank is back on form with this latest input

Thanks again Bob for all your help and advice in the past

John

here's a poem I wrote the day after I found this site..

Who is it?

You kept me up,
I haven't slept.
I've laughed a little,
I've also wept.
I only met You yesterday,
but now I can not stay away.

So many emotions coming out,
but who is it, I chat about?

Already we've covered,
so very much.
From wanting to die,
to a heart that's been touched.
It's only been since yesterday,
but now I can not stay away.

So many feelings coming out,
but who is it, I chat about?

For hours and hours,
I've sat on this chair.
Feeling Your feelings,
and the thought's that You share.
It's only been since yesterday,
but now I can not stay away.

The deepest thoughts have been about,
but who is it, I chat about?

So who is it, I chat about?
Have You not yet, worked it out?
I love Your poems, old and new.
Have You guessed yet?
It's all of You.

few months later and nothings changed lol..

Thats awesome you should publish it if you havnt allready
Oh hang on i can go look at your poems again and see lol

Full marks 5/5

Keep em coming folks im getting to enjoy this topic
John

Donna I just found your poem and spent a bit of time reading some of your poems You have a wonderful way of writing (From the heart) which I love
Keep going
Regards John

wow all these poem are so amazing i wish i could make one up liek that but i cant lol anyways well written all of thses poems :)
lovelove
Alice
xxx

aww thank You so much John, that means a lot to me. :D xx

Alice dont put yourself down Just go to your latest poem and see what is written by me

John

Donna no problem see my comments in our club topics
Love
John

club topics?

Oh you cant can you your not in the same club as me Silly me lol

Must be old timers disease

Theres a discution somewhere on here relating to the fact that I only give honest comments and opinions as i see them

Sorry for the concussion

Im A bit cunfusled

Love
John

lol, I haven't joined any of the clubs on here.. Didn't even go to look and see what the clubs were until earlier, and they kind of confused me lol.. thought they were going to be discussions, not more poetry submissions

hell you posted that reply quickly are you on here live at the moment wow

yeah lol.. am live :P.. spend most of my spare time here

Yeh me too recently
I was suspended last year but I am back with a vengeance Hey is this turning into a chat page LoL

Ive just read your poem about your friends baby and well what can I say Ive Rated 5 and left a comment Its so sad

I will pray for the little one

John

I just read it.. Thank You, it means a lot.. hopefully the more people that pray, the better chance she will have.. lets hope so anyway.. Haven't heard anymore today from my friend, and she said no news is good news, so hopefully so far so good xx

OK please keep me posted
John

I will, and thank You again.. x

"person who lies to get a better life"

he looks at me with those eyes,
but yet im blinded by his love.
one day i cought u with a girl,
i yelled and cryed with hurt.

then now u try to make my life un heard,
by making lies and telling them so they are heard.
then all the girls like u have them under ur spell,
then one day i make ur life like hell then mine.

good one