comment swop

Hi.

I don’t want comments personally, I am asking on behalf of a friend.

You see my friend (and a member of this site) is currently in hospital, I won’t say why as it is likely to create a very negative response… but I thought it would be nice for him to return to some comments on his work :)

He hasn’t been on here much recently, but I am sure he will be back once the current situation is over.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=181366 ß that is his page

Just comment on any of his poems, and then come back here telling me how many you commented upon. And then either myself or his brother ( http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=183027 who I have enlisted to help give out comments as I start lectures this week so may be low on time) will return the same number of comments to you :)

Sound fair?

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=181366

a funny symbol appeared before... so i'll try again... ^ that is his page

no one? :(

Okies i just did To the three people who destroyed my life, hit the floor, a letter to my father and self harm is for attention?

ok :)

will go do 4 of yours now or as soon as my connection speed decides to increase (stupid uni network)

sorry... this network is a little unpradictable and the computer rooms always full :(

back online now though. will go comment now :)

offer is still open too... come on people, a fair deal i think

i did one "the hunger of the blade"
Could you do my latest?
" I dont have a prince?"

Thank you!

ok, done all of them now.

I'm sorry it took so long... registered in the computer rooms now though so internet far less tempermental.

any more?

ok... logging off again...

but I promise to return any and all comments tomorrow.

you're getting double here... as I'm sure that when he comes back orion will return the comments too... it's a great deal...

please?

:(

(yes it's emotional blackmail... but I care not :P)

:(

done 2of them..simply beautifully written....

done 2 of yours, really brilliant

anyone else?

I have commented 3 so far, but will most likely do more when i have time.

I commented on 2 of the poems. There amazing!! 5/5 on both! Get well soon to him.

Ok, done 3 of Tammies poems (let me know if you did any more so that I can comment on a few more of yours)

And 2 of F A - I Cant Be Perfect!!s

Any more? :)

Wow He really has some powerful poetry.. I R/R/C 2 but have added him to my faves so I can read the rest.. I hope he gets well soon xx

I read three of his poems. Two of which brought tears to my eyes. Feel free to comment on any three you want. I hope he gets better.