Comments??

I have two new poems, one has just one comment, and the other none. So I was hoping for some honest constructive feedback from you lovely people here.

A tip...

"Buttercup Laces" is easier to understand, but it's longer.
"Manager" requires you to have an open mind, but it's pretty short.

So it's up to you which one you read (or you can do both if you like).

Now, for every comment I recieve I'll return the favour doubled.

So if you read 1 poem, I'll give 2 comments back.
If you read both poems, I'll give 4 comments back.

Thanks in advance.

Come on, anyone?

I'll do them, I promise but not now, because I have to go out! Sorry, but I will do them later today!

Solitude
A special gift
Bottom Feeder

Can you rate as well?

RoadandtheRadio -

I've done them, and voted.

Anyone else?

Thanks poetess,

I've r/r/c on four of your poems!