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Name : Simple Sensation
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Joined : Sep 22, 2006
Posts : 790

Hey all,
Could you please tell me what you think of my poem "i dont like me"
It was the first ever poem i wrote.
I want honest oppinions because i really want to improve my poetry writing.
Any advice is appreaciated.
Thank you!

- Name : Simple Sensation
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Simple Sensation
19 years ago

Please some one... i want to improve my poem writing.

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- Name : TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
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TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
19 years ago

I did it!

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- Name : Simple Sensation
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Simple Sensation
19 years ago

Awww thanks hun! Youres are great!! I loved the 9/11 tribute. So do you have any tips for improving?

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- Name : Simple Sensation
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Simple Sensation
19 years ago

Lol! thank you!! Any tips??

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- Name : Megann Lee
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Megann Lee
19 years ago

Done. :]

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- Name : Simple Sensation
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Simple Sensation
19 years ago

Thanks! Grammer is evil!! lol.
Any tips?

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- Name : Tammie
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Tammie
19 years ago

Done. Nice write. =]

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- Name : Simple Sensation
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Simple Sensation
19 years ago

aww thanks! Yeah ive edited it now. :)

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