The ending of the storm

Hi !
I've recently written a new poem called: The ending of the day, and one called The storm . I would really like if someone could read, rate, and comment on them . I'm trying something different and I want to know if I am any good at it . I'm not going to make false promises to gain the comments and votes. But I will return the favor to anyone that does. Thank you all ahead of time because this really means a lot to me .

God Bless
Letty