Safe Haven (Very Important)

Recently I've been writing some short scenes to eventually make into a book. I posted part of it here to test the waters basically with this character. So far the reactions I got about her were all positive. So please read and rate Safe Haven (A story SCENE not a poem)
and I will comment and rate two of yours ONLY IF YOU LEAVE TITLES. NO DARK POEMS.

Sure thing. I read your new one too!

tis nice, but i can't be bothered to comment so don't bother on mine!! (p.s. any-one reading this i am not lazy just tired!! and it is a cool poem)!