Please read my poem.

I just joined about an hour ago, so I'm not exactly sure how this works, but I'd like comments and feedback on my first poem called The Dragon Died. And yes, it is mistitled because it was originally titled something else, and I forgot to change the title when I posted it. Anyway, just read it. I'll look for a way to change the title, so if The Dragon Died isn't there, look for the poem The Dragon Hatched. Thanks alot!

Okay, I changed the title! Now it's The Dragon Hatched.

Hey well done :] and welcome to the site :]

Thank you very much, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

I wrote a new poem. It's not as good, but I think it's okay and worth a reading, if you don't mind. Thanks again!