Clarity Pyramid - Form contest

Oooh! Jenna wants to try one! They sound so relaxing, so if it frustrates me, I am going to blame you! Lol. Can we reserve a spot? Or just enter it and whatnot? Cause if we can reserve, can Jenna reserve a spot please? Lol.

-Jenna.

^ Lol.. Can I reserve a spot? =P

Terra wants reserved spot please.. lol im on my last contest. :P plus you have done my contests :P haha and this sounds fun and hard :P

tehe as soon as i finish Jennas song contest... lol i got a whole 3 verses. :( i am writers blocked tonight. lol

and i wish people luck to

lol writing it in my book right now so i dont forget..

Haha yeah Jess, Third person is the way we gangstas do up in Canada lmao.

-Jenna.

im done Jenna's Song Poem.. so i will do your tomorow... i am going to sleepy.

lol

HEART [clarity pyramid]
By: Twisted Heart

HEART
Broken
Powerless

Shattered by dismay
Guarded by the soul's sword
Humbled by distrust and grief

"A battered house of loneliness"

This doesn't really have to do with a life event, I don't think. If it's not right, then tell me and I will delete.

DREAM
Strolling
Fantasy

Pretending the truth
Content yet lost for words
Encaged by her swirling lies

"A temple, a throne of dying hope"

-Love.-

LOVE
Broken
Innocent

Hearts beat with pure joy
While eroding from pain
By ones' harsh words and actions.

"Love conquers all in a time of need"

© Jenna Elphick
October 8, 2006.

--This was a tough one! Good choice for a contest lol.--

-Jenna.

TRUST [clarity pyramid]
By: Red-Rose

TRUST
Mislead
Veracious

Can bring peace and bliss
Or break apart your life
betrayal of your majesty

“Trust hard to obtain, and retain”

... ohkay.. maybe i should have read a little better then i did

-Terra

Heart

HEART
Saddness
Confusion

Sadness consumes you
Tearing your life apart
Gripping at your broken heart

"Broken hearts almost never heal"

this was a cool idea...I had never heard of a clarity poem before! liked the different style

×ciaO bEllA× ©

Sorry Doll, I fixed it! =]

-Jenna.

oops... lol fixed it

sorry i'll fix it!! oops!

Back to top she goes. :D

Tears [Clarity Pyramid]

TEARS
Dribble
Painfully

Hearts pulling apart
Eyes reflecting hatred
Emotions cruelly released

“Smiles cover pain; but tears free it”

Jess, This was so difficult. I don't usuall write style poetry. Fixed the problems. Thanks

bump

Hehe... I have almost decided the winners..

Any last minute entries??

WOW. I'M SO EXCITED BY THIS WIN. DIDN'T THINK I HAD IT IN ME. THANKS ALOT FOR CHOOSING ME.

CONGRATS TO THE OTHER WINNERS

HAPPINESS
JEANNIE