Criticism for your poems

Leave two titles of yours here and I WILL comment and vote on them. I will go thorugh other poems and your profile if I think I need to knwo more in order to comment.

But be ready for Ctiticism. I wont leave a comment with "Nice poem" or a "Good one". And don't think I will give 5 for every poem I read. I will look at the concept, thought process, vision, flow, rhyming, words used and punctuation at the minimum.

Do not leave Haikus or Tetracysts here, I do not have the knowledge to analyze and rate short poems.

Only first five members to reply will have thier poems commented upon.

I tell you once again, be ready for Criticisms. I do really write long comments.

Could you do "Tarnished Mirror" && "Weakened Butterfly" for me? Thankss, xx.

*Braces herself for criticism* =P

Ah..nice

-Changing Lanes-
-Untitled Gibberish-

Thanks in advance.

Hey, cool!

Can you please do:
- Endless battle
- Why?? (poems about bulimia)

And can you leave tips on improvement please? Thank you in advance!

Solitaire
'Til Poetry could stand

Jessy,

Your poems are done. Feel free to barge me if I have upset you. My humble apologies if I have overstepped my boundaries.

Can you comment on my poem, My Languid Loneliness ?

Mistress,

Your poems are done.

Would you mind commenting on my new poem "My Languid Loneliness"

F.A. I can't be perfect,

Nice nick man. Your poems are done. Can you comment on my poem "My Languid Loneliness".

Yeah no prob. It aint as long as your comments though. Thanks for the honesty. Yeah, im bulimic and im so glad you didnt judge me or my writing because you felt sorry for me. And yeah im a newbie in the world of poem writing, Ill keep trying! Thanks soo much again! xx

RoadandtheRadio,

The first title must be "Solitude" as you do not have a title named "Solitaire".

I have commented on them. If you do not mind just pick any one of my poems and comment on them.

sorry you're right about that title and I will in a bit

Anyone in the future wants my comments on particular titles, private message me.

But give me atleast a week as I will be busy. Feel free to storm your nasty feelings about my poems.

I don't care if you do not vote but please comment exactly what you felt reading my poems, even if you did not find anythign to criticize.

I have time for one more poem today. Somebody give me a title, Quick!

"Lost Dreams" is the title MY1&only. You do not have a title "Lost in Dreams". I Also did your other poem "Dreams Made a Reality" which I thought your best work recently. I went through a couple of more like "Unspoken desires", "Young Girl with a Troubled Soul" but I think the comments I made for Lost Dreams holds good for them too. Be more creative with your titles. I think you struggle for your titles.

To all in this Thread,

If you have felt that my comments were useful, please praise my comments. You can do this by Clciking the "Praise" link just below my comment of your poem. This will help to get an award, and in turn help me start a club for Criticism only.

And once again; please feel free to go through any of my works and to provide comments that are as long as mine.

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