Criticism Thread Again

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Same Concept Repeated Again

Leave two titles of yours here and I WILL comment and vote on them. I will go thorugh other poems and your profile if I think I need to know more in order to comment.

But be ready for Ctiticism. I wont leave a comment with "Nice poem" or a "Good one". And don't think I will give 5 for every poem I read. I will look at the concept, thought process, vision, flow, rhyming, words used and punctuation at the minimum.

Do not leave Haikus or Tetracysts here, I do not have the knowledge to analyze and rate short poems.

Only first three members to reply will have thier poems commented upon.

I tell you once again, be ready for Criticisms. I do really write long comments.

Acia,

Please leave titles......
Give me something to work upon.

but please dont downvote them badely like u did mines, even though i wrote if u dont like them then just dont vote

Goran,

I normally do not vote if I am going to give less than 4. But I thought you were a Pro!.

Sorry Buddy if it hurt you, you can downcast any number of my poems in return.

hahaha

I dont vote if it is less than a 5....
but poetry is not about voting or downvoting its about writing your feelings and the way you feel can not be wrong,
but it was strange as every poem that u commented on was down so it mean you even did not like one of my poems, so i really dont know what poetry mean to you....
but I will never downvote cause you may understand but not a 13 year old who come to this site with all the hope, to cure the pain but then guess wut??
we make them hate the site and hate poetry, so voting really dont count.............

Look Goran,

Look Goran,

Look Goran,

Look Goran,

Look Goran,

look at what?

Ahhhhhhhhhhh,

Some Problem with my Keyboard.

Goran,

I think my Votes have affected you deeply, I apologize. But I do not vote 5/5 for every poem. I do have read some wondeful poetry in my life and do believe me I will appreciate it when I see such class. Maybe it's jsut that I am more of a person who relates to processes and rules; and maybe you are more of a emotional person.

My huble apologies again...

na man, dont need to appology and it never did affect me cause I'm not in an election for a political office who need votes to win, i been had (1) s for my poems and i was glad cause it showed me i need to make it better,
the only question i asked you was
you downvoted like 6 or 7 of my poems that you read
NONE OF THEM WAS BETTER THAN A (1) THAT YOU GAVE THEM????
just answer my this question, and i promise if they are not, i will not write another word in my life
is that a deal????????

Goran,

1??

I never did really rate anypoem in my life with a 1, the least I have given is 3. Maybe my did it by clciking somehwere I did not want to just like the Look Goran lines in this thread. And I thought I had rated only 3 of your poems. 6 or 7? I read 6 or 7... but I am sure that I conciously rated only 3.

Even out of ignorance, it is a Terrible mistake from my end.

yeah you did more than three, and an example would be having 4.6 with 35 votes but after yours if it was 4.5 with 36 votes what that mean, you gave it a 3?
but it is ok, honestly i am not mad about it or anything, and I believe honestly is something, so I wish everyone was honest like you

But still man, I did not do it with intention. Beleive me, I DID not want to give you a 1. You KNOW that your poems are soo Good, and teh only reason I even gave you a three is that you said that you had some works published and I expected more of you, other writing the same poem would have got a 4 from me at least.

1 is not my HOnest opinion. Oh My! I mus tbe very careful with my keyboard. The problem is I like to use my Keyboard rather than the mouse, so maybe I used it ot press Enter at the Wrong times. I thank you for telling me, so that I can be careful from now on.

hahaha,
thank you, and just use your mouse,looooool
take care

Acia,

Refer to my other thread "Who wants Criticism?" for your poems' comments.