Unique *USE THIS LINE* Contest!!!

Come Dark Light

Oh darkness encompass the twilight,
My weakness for blood, my appetite,
For it is my hunger that leads me to wander,
Upon the streets while the cities in slumber,

Cobblestones tainted with each step I take,
A void to fill before the daybreak,
Opening windows cobwebs dissipate,
Wooden floors creak beneath my weight,

A maiden at last to fulfill my desires,
Inevitably taken her soul transpires
Pale moonlight dances on her skin,
Enticing breath rolls off her chin,

Come dark light, shine into her deserted heart,
Two souls as one to never depart,
Pangs within me begin to wane,
Her vivid soul runs through my vein

M.K.S.

Who Cares...Which line did you pick?

Obviously weve all seen the little mess thats like 6 pages long.
So im bumping the real pages up

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Need more PEOPLE!

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i picked the one my name is under up there:

10. Waiting for the sun for we have no where to run

**Who Cares***

yeah...

Okay, I like your poem, but I don't see that line in your poem.

i'd like the one between me and my reflection, whom do you love...please! Thanks ! Jpoet*

i broke it up...look at the last 2 lines..it says...

Now I'm just waiting for the sun,
For we have no where to run…

see it? waiting for the sun, for we have no where to run... yeah...hope its ok like that

when is this over? lol =] i couldn't find if it was posted or not

Me or My Reflection?

She's so beautiful as she prances around.
The other so timid, barely uttering a sound.
But she's so quiet, she rarely comes out,
And the other keeps going, and dancing about.

Both love you with everything inside,
But one shows it clearly as the other just hides.
She wants to tell you what runs through her mind,
But searching for words, she loses the time.

So the other speaks up and says it first
The other feeling the pangs of second, worst.
Still you say that you love us the same,
But a heart has room for only one name.

I long to be whoever you would choose,
But being both, well, all three would lose.
So who is it you think the most of?
Between me and my reflection, whom do you love?

By: Jpoet*
P.S. For the line, "Between me and my reflection, whom do you love?"

I am now CharismaticCountryGirl...not Jpoet! Thanks!
Charisma*

Good Job people

Results are in!

Oh Wow. Thank you so much. **Bows** That means alot to me that you thought well of my poem. Thank you for a fantastic contest.

This contest was a lot of fun, and I loved the line I got to use! Thanks so much for 3rd!
Charisma* formally Jpoet

Awe, thanks so much Hunnie! (:

-Jenna.

congrats winners!

Awe, thank you Noni! I really tried for you. =]

Congrats to everyone else!

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

thank you:)