Will Return the Favor

Can people please comment on my last two poems I posted, I really want to hear from you, what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong. Thank you and I'll defiently return the favor...

Oh thanx Jae, I done yor 2 they were really good to read Flowed on from one to the other. Oh and Elijah I done Ink, I hope you dont mind i done a few more of yours because they were so good.

O.K... Did 2 ... I really like your style , I'll def. be back for more 2morrow... If you got time please do "Unwanted" & another one of your choice ...Thanks!

Thanx MY1&only, Goth, & ~ Acia ~, i appreciate all of you's taking time out to comment and vote and I returned the favor thanx.

k. done 2

check out

-Changing Lanes-
-Untitled Gibberish-

thanks.. :

Done... Really enjoyable, I liked Untitled Gibberish the best, good work 5/5 from me...
Karms

ok i will do it now ....

well its done

Thanx sweet liq, i done 3 of urs too... Appriciate it...