Line from a song contest

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K this is my first contest so if I do anything wrong plz tell me so i can fix it.

anyways back to the contest...

I will choose 10 lines i like from 3 of my favorite bands
most of them should be pretty easy to write about so i will add 2 little twists..i will have 9 lines selected for everyone...and the 10th line is a hard one and is for the winners only..the second twist is that...you can look at the song for an idea if you know what it is but you cannot use more then 2 conseqetive words in the same verse/chorus and 5 consequetive words from the whole song...and if you know the song...put the title and band in brackets somewhere in your post but u gotta tell me that thats what is it is for cuz im stupid and may not know

Rules:
1.One line per writer(if there is some left you may trade but you have to keep the new one if you do)
2.Any topic
3.Any length
4.Must rhyme
5. Must be new
6. Must be yours

Line:

1. A little taste of hypocrisy
2. My god, My tourniquet
4. What do I have but negativity
5. I linger in the doorway-Reserved for Noni Wang
7. Just caught in the undertow(or...Caught in the undertow...both will work for me)-Done by Ciao Bella
8. Dont try to fix me im not broken-Done by BrokenTessa
9. When I say shotgun you say wedding-Reserved for Lush Fcuk

Contest Ends: When all lines are taken
i'll judge them and the top 3 will be given the 10th and final line

Reward: 1st: 10 r/r/c's
2nd: 5 r/r/c's
3rd: 3 r/r/c
HM's: 1r/r/c

Edit: I thought of a reward for the final winner...I will add them to my favorites =)
Get writen!

so these lines have to be in the poem?

or are they tittles?

and does it have to be new?

(not all for me but i know they'll be asked)

x.x:Lauren

yep they have to be in the poem atleast once i dont care how many times

Can I please reserve When I Say Shotgun, You Say Wedding? (Time To Dance - Panic! At The Disco.) I didn't know if we were to say the band here or not? Lol.

-Jenna.

man i like 1 and 4! DAMN....lol.

ok, i can't really CHOOSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHH!!!!!!!!!!

ok,fine number [1]! AHHH!!!!

idk the band tho, lol

Hey suicide...if you know the other two bands...1 is very similar to it in terms of genre(not exactly the same but everyone who likes one of the bands likes the other two)...

7. Just caught in the undertow(or...Caught in the undertow...both will work for me)
please!! it's Linkin Park...idr the name of the song

yay I finished it!!

Caught In The Undertow
by ×ciaO bEllA×

I'm caught up in your undertow
It's pulling me away so I'll never know

I'm swirling around and I feel like I'm dead
All thoughts of you spinning 'round in my head

Caught in the undertow, pulled away
What am I supposed to do or say?

Caught in a current that'll never let go
I can't believe you would ever stoop so low

Facing the waves as the splash onto me
Wondering how I can possibly be

Swimming around with my head in the water
Wondering how our love, you could slaughter

Caught in an undertow that will never let go
Don't lie to me and don't say no

The water's cold but your words are like ice
I stayed with you once, but I can't do it twice

Caught in the undertow that finally let go
Broken free from you, you will never grow

Freedom at last from the high rolling stakes
That's just one mistake you were willing to make

awesome...i like it...lmao i was just gonna say i will post the name of the song and band but that will give too much away seeing as 3 r from each band lol

I gave the contest a week...but nobody seems to want to do any poems so i'll just do it till all the titles are taken

what ever works for you! =]

=)

we've got quite a tight neck race goin on here -.-

really?! do tell lol!

lol

I will have mine in hopefully by tomorrow.

-Jenna.

RESERVE Number 5 For Me!!

I linger in the Doorway

i'll see you both to it....and like...finally some competition for ciao....jeez lol

yep...u got it any idea what song it is? or who its by?

anyone else have some poems???

im gonna take a couple out cuz this will take way too long

lol am i the only one on here? lol haha I need competition!! lol there are better writers that me out here!!! lol

haha i remember the name of the song!! numb by linkin park!

yay! u win...a life time supply of nothin! :P

come on people start gettin ur poems in....this is gettin tidious to keep open for nothing...please hurry

i'll try to this on monday...i hope! sorry for keeping u waiting.

Sorry hunn, I was busy with packing yesterday and I only got around to a chapter in my book. I will try and write this after I am done judging my other contests. Sorry.

-Jenna.

no prob lol...i was just kinda impatient that no one was signing up...and forgot there was still some reserves lol...i dont care if u couldnt get around to it...im probably the biggest worry-free person u'll ever meet(even if not in real life lol)

k im adding a bit of incentive to this contest because as of now there is 1 done and 2 on the way or 3 i forget...and there is 9 lines...so ya im adding stuff

unreserve mine please.........

Ooh finally...good poem:P

although it was already reserved for concealed i will let u submit it...but concealed can still submit it

=P...i knew that

well...i guess this has been a complete failure...i'll start judging now...doesnt really matter tho but oh just for the helluvit i'll judge em

this one was REALLY hard to judge cuz there was SOOOOOOOOOOOO many contestants...lol

umm so here it is

1st-BrokenTessa-I really liked this poem. It had great flow and lots of meaning to it...I noticed you didnt know what song it was from...it was Hello by Evanescence

2nd-Ciao Bella-I liked this poem alot too but there was something about it that didnt put it above Broken's poem...im not sure what it is but ya...and you knew what song it was...awesome...

Just tell me which poems u want me to r/r/c and i'll hop on it...and ciao since i liked ur poem so much i'll give u 8 instead of 5

lmao...well i hope everything gets better...i'll start on em after lunch =)

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hi wow I didn't find this till today... if you could do

Do You Love Me Or Not
Blackened Red Rose
Hopelessly Romantic [Lyrics]
I'm Just A Poor Cinderella
Not A Textbook Romance
So Much For My Happy Ending [Damn Mistakes]
I've Woken To Find Myself In The Shadows Of The Past
Defintion: Best Friend

plez and thanks!

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