Helpful comments please?

I'd appreciate helpful comments and improvement suggestions on my newest write please.

It's called "Four Leaf Clover," however, I am unsure of the title so I'm even looking for ideas on that front.

In a nutshell, it's about discrimination of individuality.

It's a very raw and basic write, so I'm looking to improve it. Please feel free to tell me what I should either scrap, edit, or improve on, and also what is decent so I can expand on that.

Thanks!!

Oh and I'll try and return the favour (to decent comments) asap!