Ashley's Poetry Contest

Must be your own (der..)
1 poem per person
no cussing plz

***DEADLINE*** OCTOBER 23RD!

Pick one of these lines to put into your poem. Your poem have to be related to the line.

ONE (1) PERSON FOR EACH LINE

1. Heaven on earth
*RESERVED* Oracle

2. I like how you love me
*RESERVED* Crazyandsweet

3. Screaming inside
*RESERVED* Disturbed one

4. Cold hearted
*RESERVED* Letty....

5. Blue moon; Blue heart
*DONE* >liquid dreams

6. Unheard in silence
*RESERVED* ŘÅÇĦ♥

7. Suspicious suspicion

8. Nightly awakening
*RESERVED* Broken reflection

9. Frozen heartache
*RESERVED* Lush.Fcuk-*

10. Secretly Shouting
*RESERVED* xo[SUICIDE]23[SEPTEMBER]ox

You must get title reserved before you submit your poem here. Thanks and good luck!

Prizes:
Top 5 get 10 comments and 5 votes

yay 1st pick! but anyways

omg...i cant choose they are so good...right now im deciding between...screaming inside,cold hearted,unheard in silence,and secretly shouting and maybe frozen heartache...but...because i can only pick one!....i'll take uhh...(long pause)..............(longer pause)...........................i guess i'll take screaming inside

Can I please reserve frozen heartache?

-Jenna.

can I do...
I like how you love me?

Wow! It's hard to choose. I guess I'll try cold hearted please.

Letty

Can I reserve nightly awakening please...

i'll take blue moon, blue heart

~*~"Blue Moon; Blue Heart"~*~

Wallowing in pity
The darkest of nights
Tears dripping to the ground
Absolutely no light

Falling to the ground
Heart ripping in two
The shades of the night
Haunting in blue

The pain always there
Tearing quickly apart
The moon casting over
Blue moon; blue heart

The darkness of solitude
The deepness of shame
Blue weaving in
The casting of blame

Horror in the eyes
Of the one so true
The other is clueless
Of the dark blue

Gut-wrenching terror
When they're apart
So the blue creeps over
Blue moon; blue heart

Copyright (C): Rhianna

This may not make sense to you, but it does to me because well... I know what this means and how it relates to certain things. Well, I hope you like it.

Good job >liquid dreams! It did make sense and thank you for participating in this contest. BTW I am posting the deadline today. Check first post everyone! ~Ashley Paul

I'd like to reserve unheard in silence.

Thank you!

Rachel

Rachel Great title. was going to reserve it myself. Have fun.

Happiness
jeannie

secretly shouting pls!

SECRETLY SHOUTING

can't you hear that girl mumbling?
can't you hear that girl crying?
can't you hear that girl whining?
can't you see that girl was just ME!

i am secretly shouting, no one can hear me?
my voice is secretly mute, can't you hear me?
i beg your merciless to save me from this cage of hell
and please tell me
that i am free!
free!
free!
(free!)

can't you hear the sounds she make?
and how she's holding her breath to death she'll take
when she close her eyes, nightmares come alive
she ask how the hell did i arrive
in this situation so useless!'

i am secretly shouting, no one can hear me?
my voice is secretly mute, can't you hear me?
i beg your merciless to save me from this cage of hell
and please tell me
that i am free!
free!
free!
(free!)

please tell me you hear my voice
I'd shout till i die, i have no choice
i beg your mercy
to come here and save me
I'm innocent, I'm just a girl, I'm telling the truth
but I'm just a girl, that's forever mute

i am secretly shouting, no one can hear me?
my voice is secretly mute, can't you hear me?
i beg your merciless to save me from this cage of hell
and please tell me
that i am free!
free!
free!
(free!)

can't you hear that girl mumbling?
can't you hear that girl crying?
can't you hear that girl whining?
can't you see that girl was.... just......ME............

awwww!! I wanted that one!!!!!! darn....x.x okay, unheard in silence please!

Sorry RACH already reserved unheard in silence

Heaven on Earth, please

Happiness
Jeannie

Delete

I like how you love me...

I like how you love me...
with the gentlest of hands,
expressing where my love,
with you forever stands!

I like how you love me...
every time we have a sweet embrace,
it unleashes the everlasting of grace,
shining from the beautiful glow of your face!

I like how you love me...
even when we say nothing at all,
we still can't help but let our love fall,
and combine the strongest of walls!

I like how you love me...
during the good and bad times,
your love always prevails and shines,
releasing my heart to sing with the chimes!

I like how you love me...
every second of each and every day,
right beside you is where I will always stay,
I like how you love me in this very special way!

RESERVE NUMBER 1 for ME

Screaming Inside

Something is eating me,
Eating my soul,
If I dont stop it now,
It will swallow me whole,

Im screaming inside,
My hollow mind,
No one is here,
Its me I must find,

But through the depth,
Of deception and lies,
I give in to the screams,
I must say my goodbyes

By: Disturbed One

P.S how do u do the little...copyright sign thingy

darn!! grrr..... lol okay then nvm

I reserved and wrote a poem for 'Heaven on Earth' If you want me to delete, then tell me and I will.

Happiness
Jeannie

I haven't reserved it and someone else already has, but just in case that other person doesn't make it, please accept mine....

Nightly Awakening
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Darkness.
Sinking around my skull, and slowly
submerging me in its velvetiness.
Penetrating and permeating.
It enters like cold molten lead
and drowns me in its heaviness.
It numbs me, or maybe hones too much-
I do not know.

I can't breathe.

The night wind howls, but I think it feels
like music to me; until it dies down.
Stillness welcomes the pain that hides;
but it seems to savor the veil it wears.
Or could it be that it cannot expose
a face it hasn't seen?
I do not know.

I can't breathe.

The raw, stark sky screams
of needed frankness;
and I start to yearn for clouds
just because the truth lacerates.
When I cannot feel love,
the moon glares down and taunts
rosy thoughts; but I don't fret-
you can't jeer at corpses.

I still can't breathe.
(maybe I don't want to)

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All Rights Reserved.

Today is the deadline, and I have it written out but I am at school and it is at home. I never noticed this was ending so fast. I will type it up when I get home. Sorry.

-Jenna.

I'll take suspicious suspicion Thanks! I noticed it was the only one left, so I'll do it just so all of them are done and you have a complete contest! Jpoet*

My Suspicions

I ask you again if you are all right
And get the same answer as before
You can't fool me with that look in your eyes
There is definitely something more

You smile at me as if everything's fine
You say I'm blowing things out of control
Nothings wrong, you've no reason to cry
And there's not anything I can console

But I've been married to you for ten years
And I listen to my intuition
Your words are just talk you're spilling here
And I've got a suspicious suspicion

You're lying to me and I don't know why
I thought trusting is what lovers do
But I guess when I go to sleep tonight
I'll hug my suspicions instead of you

By: Jpoet
October 23, 2006

ASHLEY i already did the poem! lol

who won?

Sorry everyone. I was unable to get to a computer in the past 2 days. long story... anyways-

WINNERS (TOP 5)
1st- Dhaval
2nd- >liquid dreams
3rd- JPoet
4th- Suicide
5th- crazyandsweet

Prizes will be given today or tomorrow. so dont worry. Congratulations!

OMG! am i suicide? oh yea, i think i am, i hope. if it's me, THANK YOU!!!!!!!

im sorry i totally went blank about the contest, please forgive me and congrats to the winners

Yes your suicide lol Congrats everyone

haven't been on but thanks for the placing :)

Obviously weve all seen the little mess thats like 6 pages long.
So im bumping the real pages up