[ Tired Of Deceit (Strike 3) ]. . .[Natalie]

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Yesh. New poem. :]

    Please read, rate and comment, and I shall return the favor.

    NO one liners, please.

    {CLOSED}

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Man your peoms are good.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thank youuuu. :] Tehe! ..I did one for you. ;P

    Anyone else? ♥

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Done!
    xx

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    LuvSuxGetDrunk: ...Just so you know, it did rhyme. :P ..The rhyme scheme was abcbd :]

    Getting to yours now though. Tehe. {And, done.}

    Anyone else?

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol.. Yesh. :P I guess that proves my rhyming isn't forced maybe. Haha.

    Anywho.. Did you want me to do one of your older ones Jessa?

  • Jenni Marie
    19 years ago

    Ahhh i just went back and re read it and realized it, man i need to get my head together today.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Mmkay then. ;P Ily 2! *hugs*

    Anybody elllllse? Tehe.

  • Mark
    19 years ago

    It's favour silly! Hehe.. I might comment later if I get around to it.. but hey you know me, I'm lazy! =)

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Haha, Mark-Man! I know it's favour ;P But if I spell it like that everyone will try and correct me, cos most people on this site are American or Canadian. Lol..

    But mmkay. ;P Be as lazy as you like, cause I'll be here for awhile. =D

  • Mark
    19 years ago

    Yay go Natalie! .. I will be too so yeah.. lol

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Yay! Lol. ;P

  • Bret Higgins
    19 years ago

    Interesting read there.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks! ....and thank you for the corrections, much appreciated! I've commented one for you. :]

    Anyone else?

  • Bret Higgins
    19 years ago

    Thanks for answering my question. I like it more now I know it's a poem for you.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    That's okay. :]

    ...Anyone else? If sooooo, I'm off to sleep, cause it's 1am here, and I gotta get up early for work stuff.. and then I've got parties. xD ...But yesh. Leave your titles and I'll get to them before I go anywhere. :]

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    oooh. No one? Well I'll be here for abit now. :] So yesh.. Anyone else?

  • BeautifulxMess
    19 years ago

    Yes Done will you comment and rate
    Because of you
    My Worse Fear.

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I've done "My worse fear" ...since it's a one for one. :] ....And I forgot to say, the title should probably be "My "Worst" Fear"..

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