Ill return favour. (1 for 2)

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Hey all,
    Ok i just added a poem called "I just want to be thin(bulimia)"
    I know it aint that great but truthful comments appreciated! (Tips on improving would be helpful). And if you dont like it please tell me why.

    Thanks all.

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  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    please do 2 of my newest, preferably "These angels" and any other

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  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    I did These angels and the bullying poems. Great poems! Thanks for honest comment. Truthfully i didnt like my poem either, i just put it up for the fun of it. xx

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  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    MY1&only:

    Done! Man your poems have so much emotian in them! How do you do it?

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  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Oh right cool. Wish i had that talent.

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  • Idiosyncratic
    19 years ago

    Please do 2 of my featured poems-- thanks!

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  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Done! Great! Man so many talanted people on this site.

    Anyone else?

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  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Anyone else??

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  • awww
    19 years ago

    done! just do these two... thx!

    Still in the Silence
    Moments in Mind

    ~angel~

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  • Stephanie
    19 years ago

    Sure, I'll comment I don't mind. :)

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  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    19 years ago

    done

    please do misery hurts and an inevitable fate

    thank you xxx alex xxx

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  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Angel: Done. Great reads!

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  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Innoc3ntStar:

    I did your latest 2. They were soo good! xx

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  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    ღ girlie_goo ღ:

    Done! Loved misery hurts. inevitable faith was good too. Keep them up! xx

    Anyone else??

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