Its my birthday, so please comment!

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Lol, im 15 today. :)

    Anyways i just wrote my first ever poem about nature. I want to improve my imagery and description and i thought nature peoms are good for that.
    So please please tell me what you think! Its called "Snow Children!".

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    i will do it right now, and happy birthday!

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Thanks!
    Well, the poem was only my first try. "Practice makes perfect". Thanks for honesty!

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Come on people,i wanna know what you think. Its the first time i wrote a poem that isnt sad! (Man you must think of me as a depressed person...)