Positive Bliss, Inspirational poem for all

please comment my new poem "Positive Bliss", and chin up, keep smiling that's what its all about.

have faith in yourself and give me your best 3 poems to comment.

love Tara-Kay

okay, then. I'll make it better.
Give me your best 5 poems for me to comment on.
Is this a good deal or what?

Done! I don't remember which of my poems' you've commented on, so if you could just do a couple that'd be great!

Erica, I believe that I have now commented all your featured poems. aww, there so creepy and depressing. But very good

k jess, will do

Hey, Done!
Could you do
-We'll find perfection together
-I'll hide my guilt forever
&
-Troubled Child

xxoo Thanks and Love
Mel