Subtleties of Latitude: One for two (serious comments)

Please read and comment my latest and I'll do the same for you.

If you have had me comment on your work before you'll know to expect the same analysis.

List what you want read or I'll read your oldest poems.

Cheers,

Bret

I'll go comment and read your poem right now.

If you could, please critique my newest one... I'm not sure how good it is.

Heather, Museum, thanks for the comments, I have commented right back at you!

All right, I r/v/c'd. And BTW, to anyone who's reading this message and that hasn't read the poem mentioned in the thread title: DO SO. IT'S AMAZING.

Cheers Minkus.

Read and commented on Learning to Drive and emotion (revised)

Done!
I left you my honest comment, even though I don't think you needed mine. I also voted honestly too.

Could you please read:

Flowers in the meadow
In the future ( A wedding)

Thank you! I really appreciate it.

Best wishes
Letty

I will comment you honestly

Please comment my 2 newest

Journeys
and
The Conch

Thank you in advance

Sondos

done!

Letty, read and commented on the poems requested.

There you go, could you do my latest two please? Thankss, xx.

Jessy, you questioned my use of the last two lines, so hears my reasoning.

The continuing of the conversation highlights how stunning and fast the sunset is.

The sun sets so quickly here.

Now, this relates directly to the title. I'm from England which is at a higher level of latitude than my new home of Panama City. The sun takes a lot longer to set back in my homeland than it does here, hence my closing statement. It should make the reader wonder if I'm on holiday or on a trip where things are different.

Without this line the title is completely redundant.

I have birthday celebrations to enjoy so I'll get to your poems tomorrow.