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Rate one of any of my poems and I will do three of yours! I would apprieciate it if you did my poem called Our Own Fairy Tale Happily Ever After because I just posted it and it needs help so I would like some comments on telling me how to fix it! Thx! Also, make sure you tell me which poem you want to comment.

Innoc3ntStar

Done can you do....

What made you think you could treat me like this

Red

Different

Thanks!

Done.

Could you please do
*The Lies That My heart Told Me
*The Real Girl Inside
*What Happened Here?

Thank you
xx

Done!

could you please rate & comment on:

A Dream...
Only You...
I Miss You..

Thanks in advanced!
and please rate them ...