First poem

This is the first poem I’ve ever done and I don’t know if its good or not, comments? its called "someday this dream will end"

Done Genny!
I hope that you don't get upset about the comment that I left. But I'm sure you wanted the truth. I actually think you did pretty good for that to have been your first poem. I suggest that you keep writing hun, because you'll get better with each poem.

Letty

Hi Genny,

I left an honest comment on what I thought about the poem and how I think you can make it better.

The most important thing for you to do on this site is completely ignore the vote scores, and I mean completely. They are toatally subjective and bear very little resemblance to the quality (or in most cases, lack there of) of the poem.

Focus on the earnest comments you receive and use them to make your current poems better and your future ones stronger.

Welcome to the site.

Bret