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11th. i just totally got my heart broken so if im a tad slow with this please bare with me.

Hey There... Im 'BrokenTessa,'
However I Just Made A New Account On Here,
So I Will Have Too,
But I Will Mainly Be Using This One.
I Am Now Going To Post My Entry
'Do You Really Care.'

Do You Really Care?

You Left Marks Upon My Skin,
In Which No One Can See,
You Have Your Hate Hidden,
Somewhere Inside Of Me.

You Lie As If You Care,
But I Know That You Do Not,
It’s Just Another Game To You,
Another War That I Have Fought.

So Tell Me Yet Again,
What You Wish We Two Could Do,
So I Can Say Just One More Time,
What I Truly Think Of You.

The Awkwardness Between Us,
When We Too Have Been Apart,
After All The Times We’ve Tried This,
Once Again We Must Depart.

There Will Be No More Silence,
For I Now Know The Words To Say,
“I Don’t Hate You; Or Love You,
But This Time I Mustn’t Stay.”

No More Online Chatting,
No More Secrets Notes,
No More Sad Writing,
Written On ‘Poems And Quotes.’

I Will Erase You From My Memory,
And I Will Take It From There,
So This Is My Goodbye To You,
But ‘Do You Really Care?’

ok cool beans:P

S o if you could hold all of our secrets
U p to the burning sunset before us;
N ever again to be heard, would you?

G et out while you can, forget about me and you,
O h babe, you know that we can't do this.
I mpeccable to the naked eye, but
N ot to me. I don't want to do this anymore.
G ood-bye never seemed so hard to say.

D ying in your arms is a sleeping beauty of your
O wn. The same old love story, one heart holding on
W ith all it can and one heart letting go. This tragic affair
N ot everyone knows; of two lovers star crossed -

A nd a matchbook romance scribbled in blood. But I'm
G oing out of my mind with all the little white lies that you
A ttempted to keep from me. My soul was raped of
I nnocence from this mistake. But for the last time, my
N aive heart will let go of it's grasp on you.

© Jenna Elphick
November 6, 2006.

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each
line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.
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--I thought I could handle the acrostic lmao, but I got really horrible after a few lines lol. --

-Jenna.

i likd it jenna nice work EVERYONE...only 3 more days:) GUESS WHAT? 1 month until im sweet 16 omg! hehe

yay!! =]

I am now CharismaticCountryGirl....not Jpoet! Thanks!
Charisma*

yeah i read it in another forum:) thanks for tellin me tho

it's over!!!! btw it's ciao (hopeless romantic)

i kno u guys are probably really pissed off at me...but there are 2 reserved poems...i sent them both an email reminding them..and said they have to have it in by tomorrow at the latest..i swear...if they dun do it by 2morro contest is over and will be judged...plus 2day im really down again as my bf broke up w/ me AGAIN (number 3 lol) and that sucks..so yeah..im sry u guys..this is the last extension i promise

I'm sorry to hear that =( Hope you feel better soon *hug*

its fine:) my friend (which i like lol) cheered me up and even if he has a gf he told me he has a crush on me 2..so that was cool. im smiling a little now..so that's cool. but thanks for the hug lol *hug*

aww I hope everything will be okay!! *hugs* =]

sry im 5 n a half hrs late..i was out w/ my best friend and her bf..just tryna relax. then i realized..being w/ her BOYFRIEND and her...just made me think about my lack of boyfriend more..lol o well:) ill live:) anyway..ok so contest CLOSED!!!

RESULTS:::

Ilinca Milosan-1st
LoganL-2nd
Jeannette 3
Xx hopeless romantic xX-h/m
Lush.Fcuk-*-h/m
Other 2 entrants-runner up h/m

congrats guys..so yeah...any preferances of what u want done..again ill say prizes in case ur new 2 my contests
1-8
2-6
3-4
h/m-2
runner up h/m-1

i wish u all couldve WON..but i dun got time...im sry to those unhappy by the results..neway if u have preferances let me kno like i said..if not give me time bcuz ive got a lot going on right now.

Oh my God! I'm so happy you liked my poem ^^
Congratulations to everyone else! *hug*
I'd like if you could comment on these poems:
1. Red roses and violins
2. Strange love
3. Stolen by the wretched moon
4. Red roses... raven feathers
5. Protected by love
6. A place in Heaven for the Fallen
7. Fallen angel
8. Chrysanthemums scent

--- you can find them in my featured poems =)
Thank you! *hug*

can you tell me which one of mine won?

The Awn
An Angels Rose (revised)
Anywhere I Lay My Head
The Arousing Cadavers
Forever Searching, Forever Not Realizing
Changing Eyes

happy that i won at least 2nd!

will u please just do all of mine...
I only have 4.

any two you like, I'm not picky! thanks for the H/M!! Ciao xx (hopeless romantic)

Jeannette i did urs...great work. logan ur 2nd one won. i liked both but the 2nd caught my eye. anyway..give me time pplz i got a lot of hw...and expecially those w/ a lot of r/r/c...ill b a while..i promise i wun 4get u guys tho. ciao ur dun

yeah okay thats cool i understand.

ok logan ur done. Ilinca Milosan i'll start urs now..idk if ill finish tho cuz i g2g2 something 4 yr book 4 skool pretty soon...ill try tho:)

k finally finished urs ilinca. ne1 else i didnt do care?

Thank you and I'm really happy you liked them =)

Just found this now. Thanks for the mention. Uh, if you don't mind, could you please do;

Eaten Alive [Parquette]
&&
The Fourth Drink Instinct.

Thanks Hunn. (:

-Jenna.

i just found this and I don't think that you did mine... if ya could please do my most recent two thanks!!!

ciao xx

well shed only do one. i think.. =] or not. lol. you go through too many name changes xD

DP~

lol i dont know who i did but i did 2 for you because u told me too and honestly idk who is who anymore. lol ive had the same name 4 over a year and ive only changed it once...come on ppl stop confusing me lol

sorry! I am hopeless romantic... sorry for the confusion!

Ciao xx