I would just like some advice.

Hey everyone. Just getting ready for work. I was hoping some people could stop by and read a few of my poems. especially my latest two. they really mean a lot to me for personal reasons. I would appreciate it and if you leave me the name of some poems of yours, i will definitely return the favor. thank you very much. xxx
Mike

I thank evereyone for the votes, but i would really love some comments.