Let Death Take You (1 for 2)

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Wrote this poem in school, so can you tell me what you think? Ill do 2 of your poems A.S.A.P.

    Oh and if you dont like it can you please tell me why? And tips on improving would be appreciated as allways.

    Thanks in advance
    xx

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Anyone??