Need honest opinion on new poem, please

I have just posted a new poem called All-American. I was very emotionaly charged when I wrote it, and I would like to know if I was blinded by my emotions or if the writing was good enough.

If you are kind enough to leave a comment, I'll be more than happy to read and comment on your poems as well.

Thanks in advance to anybody who reads my poem!

u sure have great talent in poetry...i read couple of ur poems and voting them 5...keep writing...take care...