LYRICS FOR A MOVIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ok peeps! u have 1 week to write a lyric. or more. anyways, i'm doing this project in skool making a REAL movie!!!!! ahh!!!! anyways, i'm the director or the one who handles the project and i want to make it the best damn thing! so i want u guys to make a lyric that i will put in the movie...but i don't kno who'll sing but still, i swear i'll put it in!

and if the hollywood guys watever likes it they might even give us reward and the movie will be all over websites too! so u better make it the best! so if u want to join, go here!

there will only be 10 ppl! NO MORE!!!!!

the topic i like are dark and sad, not really love cuz i don't know if it will fit in, in the movie....but anyways this is REAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! first come first serve!

rules
[1] new or old
[2] NO cussings!
[3] dark or sad
[4] RHYMING IS SO MUCH BETTER!!!
[5] ORIGINAL!!!
[6] i will criticize
[7] i might put ur name in the credits if ur lyric is damn good!
[8] have fun
[9] only ten PPL!
[10] RESERVES!!!! but don't take damn long...or else i'll take ur name off...i'm so impatient....lol

PRIZES
[1] 20 r/r/c favorites
[2] 10 r/r/c
[3] 9 r/r/c

i will only pick one lyric to put but if urs is the 2nd or 3rd, i might put it in too!!!!! so watch!!!!! try to make this the best DAMN thing u ever WRITTEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xxleisaxx

1-roadandtheradio ------not done
2-sluvious [done]
3-lush.fcuk -----not done
4-truest lies [done]
5-dark princess [done]
6-no need for a name [done]
7-emily [done]
8-ecstasyofsuicide [done]
9-hopelessromantic [done]
10-disturbed one -----not done

ASK ME QUESTIONS IF U NEED TO!

*reserve*

done!

done!

that's really a great LYRIC!!! it was sort of like a rap but it was kool! he he he!!!

anyways, i told u NOT to put CUSSINGS.....i consider ass as cussings, but anyways it was damn great!!! u can really learn stuff in that song, well i did! great job BOB SHANK!!!!

Can I please reserve?

-Jenna.

wat??? lol........that's funny! i don't really get it but watever...lmfao!!!!

i consider here "ass" as a cussing cuz if *I* [i'm not sure if i will] sing the song, my parents will kill me for saying ass.......I SWEAR!!!!

and done

^ that was going to be after the joke u said, bob, k? not the poem...lol

whats the movie about/going to be about?

i mena how can i write a song about something, when i dont know the something.,. i could be totally off topic. lol

Can I reserve?

Well, seeing as you are impatient... I might as well give you the lyric now.. :)

*Untitled*

I will be your oxygen,
When you forget to breathe,
But I won’t be the person to stop you,
When you say you want to leave.

I will be your memories,
When you don’t remember,
I will be your Christmas,
Even if you don’t stay to see December.

I will be your strength,
When you can’t stand,
I will be there,
To lend you a hand.

I will be your painkiller,
When the pain is too great,
Your quiet addiction,
That soon you’ll have to break.

I’ll be the first to know,
When your tears cease to flow,
And I’ll be the last one to leave the room.

I will put flowers,
On your grave,
I will make sure,
That the markings don’t fade.

I will be your oxygen,
When you can’t breathe,
And I won’t be the one to stop you,
When you need to leave.

ummm......the movie is a horror film and it's about this weird skull that has powers who gets stuck in this girl's face...then the skull possesses [sp?] the girl and try to make her do things like KILL pppl or something. after that, because the skull can't take off, she ended up burning herself down. but they think the skull thing is done, but still the skull is alive and that's where it will end. the shooting takes in my skool.....so yea...i hope this helps..

idk if u want to join [lauren] but i'll put u as reserve....ok? tell me if u don't want to do it anymore....

Can I submit more than one? If so please tell me. If not, I'll just submit this one.

Acid

Think about everything you've ever had you've ever thought of
Think about everything you've held close you've ever truly loved
It's all ugly, fake, full of scars that bleed when I want
Their endless torment in your dreams they are always going to haunt
They burn because you let them fall to the ground
They scar to deep that its impossible to dig them out

(Chorus)
Acid burns your veins closed
Acid lurks where you don't know
Acid lives in your soul
Acid will burn you whole

You use to dream of happiness of love of all you use to know
But now your dreams end with screams that taunt you as you go
You see flaming torches people burning ashes on the ground
Bet you wish now those chemicals you had never found

(Chorus)
Acid burns your veins closed
Acid lurks where you don't know
Acid lives in your soul
Acid will burn you whole

Did you plan this in that case you will die now
Why did you look why did you pry why did you search around
Was power what you had in mind was it all for you
Well this is internal burning scars that ooze is what I introduce

(Chorus)
Acid burns your veins closed
Acid lurks where you don't know
Acid lives in your soul
Acid will burn you whole

No.Need.For.A.Name.

if there will be more spot, u can

hey can i reserve?

Too late

You'll never turn back, its way too late
For your old mind to regenerate
You act so big when you're so small
No one catches you when you fall

You were my friend, you were like a sister
But then you took a left turn, and now the hatred will burn

You're in denial
You never say whats really true
You're so deceitful
So why in the world did I trust you?

It was too late, can't turn back
Its time to grow up, maturity you lack
I want to help, but you've shut me out
So I'll gladly sit and watch you pout

They won't tell you to your face
How much you've really messed up
How it's all your fault and

You're in denial
You never say whats really true
You're so deceitful
So why in the world did I trust you?

I shouldn't have

You're in denial
You never say whats really true
You're so deceitful
So why in the world did I trust you?

i dont know if this was what you were looking for, but...yea

This was my first attempt at lyrics awhile ago.. It's dark, but not too good, but I'm entering anyways. I really hope you like it.
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Break Her {Lyrics}

{Verse 1}
He staggers over to hear
Then he breaks her.
He'll hurt and scare her,
Leave her,
Test her.

{Hook}
She struggles back to stop this pain...

{Chorus}
Test her,
See how much she can handle.
Throw her,
To the ground and watch her cry...
Break her,
She'll never tell this secret.
Love her,
That's all she ever needed...

{Verse 2}
Break her...
Nothing she can do.
Unravel a heart
Full of pain and malice.
Break her...
She can't save herself.
Memories...
Floating through her mind,
Innocence is stolen.
{Verse 3}
Tell me
Of a darker soul.
never
Could another be so broken
As you.
Kill her on the inside.

{Hook}
She struggles to stop this pain...

{Chorus}
Test her,
See how much she can handle.
Throw her,
To the ground and watch her cry...
Break her,
She'll never tell this secret.
Love her,
That's all she ever needed...

Break her...

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

i'll try it, but I can't guarantee anything right now...

Ooh a long time ago i read a Goosebumps book called....hmmm....i think it was something like...My Shrunken Head...or something like that....and of course its Goosebumps soo...its by R.L Stine and it kinda sounds like that story like...

i just noticed...ecstacy...u dont think that its good...i think its awesome!...it depends on how u sing it...if u sing it like a soft linkin park song or like...evanescence...it could be very good!

lol just thought of something else...(3rd edit lol)
that would be an awesome song...just looking at the second verse...if amy lee(evanescence) did line 1,3,5,7 and chester bennington...on second thought(after singing it all the way through)...maybe mike shinoda would be better(both linkin park) did 2,4,6....or whatever the line count is...i actually sung it to myself if they were singing it and it sounds good lmao...im full of myself as u can see...

but i have one suggestion....i think you should switch the words from the chorus with the words of the second verse...i find chorus lyrics are better then the lines of the verses...and i think the second verse is alot better then the chorus(currently)...and im not saying the current chorus is bad im just saying that....it would fit better if u switched it...

but because i have to post on topic atleast somewhat...i'll give this a shot

WOW!!! both of them are good! that was great BOB SHANK and ECSTASY OF SUICIDE!!!!!! that was AWESOME!!!!! great job!!! REALLY!! i like that u put in a character that's demonic cuz that's wat the movie is about! lol. i love it!!!!!!!!

UnTitled

Verse 1:
When the night as finally fallen down
[light cast aside]
When the darkness finally hears my call
[Enter my mind]

Chorus:
Break me away from the cells of fire
I've lived among the ashes for too long
Free my heart, don't let them burn it again
I am...just a girl running to a place I belong

Verse 2:
Don't stop or look back/ I swear
[They'll kill you]
Don't hesitate your motives
[Don't subdue]

Repeat Verse*

Verse 3:
I know you're watching me stumbling along
You're waiting, You're waiting for me to fall
You're waiting, you're waiting, for me to cry
[You've got the key in your pocket]
Calmly waiting for me to return your reply.

Bridge:
I know that if I can't break free tonight
I'll burn once again as I've done for your delight
I can't go on like this, wandering mindlessly
The demon inside claws as it's awakening

Repeat Verse 2X

i finished it!! lol I'll have time in my study hall late to post it! =]

The Heart-Eater [Lyrics]

(chours)
A black heart beats, slowly at first
Could it be luck, or maybe a curse
It draws you near, and grips you tight
And you find out too late, that it's not right

(verse 1)
Covered in blood and written by hand
Notes and phrases you can't understand
Choking your throat and piercing your neck
They were always meant to have this effect

(chorus)

(verse 2)
You try to scream; your efforts in vain
Your mind can't push out the terrible pain
Cutting off circulation as he gets closer to your heart
It feels like he's cutting you in two and ripping you apart

(chorus)

(verse 3)
He possesses her body and kills awfuly quick
You try to get out, but your mind's just too thick
He's faster than you, and you know it's the end
As you take your last breath, she whispers "Goodbye, my friend."

(hook)
He's gripping so tightly at your soul/Ripped out your hearts so you can never be whole/Eater of hearts and all that is good/You tried to get a way, if only you could

(chorus) 2x

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Hope it's okay for your contest! =]
Ciao xx

i love both of the poem! (lyrics) i love how u wrote "Break me away from the cells of fire" that was amazing! and Ciao's too of course! lol. greaT JOB U GUYS! THEY'RE AWESOME! all of it! i wish i could use all but i'm only allowed i think 3.....but great job anyways!

oh, i'm sorry if u posted it, but dark princess u didn't reserve and the spots are all full...............ok, fine, i'll put u in, JUST U!!!!!!!!!

thanks!

Disturbed one -
I edited it. I see your point and it is a very good suggestion. Thank you.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Hey im gonna un'reserve. thatd way others will have a chance/shot. Sorry. i kinda forgot about this.. =|

x.x:Lauren

ok...thankz!

any one else? reserved ppl! lol

Thanks!!

welcome!

when's this over? lol

umm....on monday.

wow only six ppl! sigh....

any one else for the last minute?

xxleisaxx

When is the deadline for this one?

-Jenna.

whoot judging soon!!! lol (just a little excited here)

Oh it was today lol. Whoops. Sorry I didn't get mine in Hunn. I'd do one right now but you're judging soon. Good luck everyone!

-Jenna.

DRUM ROLL PLEASE!!!!!!!!

*drum roll*drum roll*drum roll*drum roll*drum roll*drum roll*

this contest is HARD to judge!!!!!!!!!

ok, the winners are!

[1] HOPELESSROMANTIC!!!!
[2] ECSTASYOFSUICIDE!!!!!
[3] DARKPRINCESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yay!!! a lot of lyrics were great, but i could only choose three....sorry but congrats!!!!!!!! ;)

leave the titles u want winners!!!!!

Oh Wow... Thank you. =] That was my first try at lyrics. XD
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Please Do (And Enjoy!):
`The 'One Man' Show {Terzanelle}
`What Is To Be Believed
`The Emotions Of Love
`The Love of Fate
`A Day Without Heros
`Gay Pride {Unless your against gays, if you are, pick another}
`Carved From Stone
`Wax Butterflies
`Wax Butterflies2 {Shakespearean Sonnet}
`Time

Goes from least recent to most recent.

Thank you, again. And congrads to everyone else.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex