Do you think

You should have put this in the forum on requesting people to read poems of yours...More feedback would have came.

-Jenna.

And as for the poem, I just read it. And it could use a little more work before submission. The flow was a little choppy and made it weird to read and some of the sentences could be stronger. Just my opinion though. It was good, but if you want to win, could use a little more work.

-Jenna.

No problem. Sorry again if that seemed rude; I had no intention of it being that way.

-Jenna.