everyone please look. first 3 people

heyy everyone.. i wrote a poem a wile ago.. and i haven`t gotten any comments on it yet.. its called "uhm?" because i don`t know what i should call it.. please give me some tips on the poem and what i should call itt.
k thanksS!

p.s.
i`ll give the frist 3 people here 2 comments on there poems!