Free R/R/C ((Returns are never shunned, though=]))

Rawr.. This is Closed. >.<

So, I am bored. I need something to do to propel my time on and make it worthy. Haha.
I give honest comments and try to help. They aren't lengthy, but they aren't one lined comments either. So, enjoy. =]
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The Rules:
1. No Love or Frienship poems - My computer doesn't allow it and I don't want to go through that horror anyways.
2. If your poems are cliche, please don't post.
3. If you don't use proper grammar or capatalization, don't bother. (This and the above really bother me and make it hard to finish the poem.)
4. Comments in return are never shunned, but are only optional (perhaps if you're bored too!) =]
5. Only ONE or TWO poems at a time.

Thank you for your time.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Could you do snow children for me?
It is my first ever nature poem, i hope it isnt cliche, but id love tips on improvement.

Please tell me what you think of

The Heritage of Dixie
Come Dark Light

Honest opinions and critique are appreciated.

Thanks,
Dixie

I'll get to these soon tonight. =]

But, Dixie, what did you mean by:
'I however cannot critique your poetry. That would be like a kindergartner grading college papers.'
Do you not understand my poetry? =S I hope that is not what you meant..
But thank you for the comment in return. =D

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Could your read Do you...?

Please and thanks. I hope it isn't cliche.. =[

>black&&blue

I will r/r/c some of yours in a few.

Please do my poems:
-My foul aggressor
-Call it a bad idea

Thanks much.
The second one is tiny, and the first one kinda sucks, but they are the ones I most need comments on.