Please comment~I will return the favor

Please comment my poetry, I would appriciate some honest feedback considering I pour my soul into poetry, as so many others of you do. So please take the time to comment mine, and I will be sure to return the favor.

mhmm, I'm one of those others. I'll definitely read your stuff. I'll comment at the least two of yours, and if you could please comment 'Blue Meets Gray' and then 'I Hate Your Control'. If I comment anymore, feel free to comment more of mine, or not, I don't really care.