Broken Kodak Moments

Okay, So I havent posted in a long.. long time.
I was woundering if you could let me know how im doing with that poem in the title..
i know its not even close to perfect or even close to goood at that matter, but yea.
Im happy to ocomment on others though.. so please, check it out.
feel free to add me gottigirl27@hotmail.com