The Game We Play

I recently wrote this poem *Points to title of post* and i did my best to make it tasteful and not sleazy so if anyone could comment this, i'll comment 3 of theirs. So it's kind of like a 1 for 3.
It's just this poem means alot and i'd like to know if i did it justice.
Thankyou..
*Gem*

Done. I thought it was really, really good. =]

Could you please do:

Your Not So Wise Words
My Loveless World
Whisper [Pleiades]

Thanks.

Tammie.

Done. Your really talented =)

Hmph..

I did it.. because I think you're super cool.. = P

Erm.. any title that fancy your liking..
(but dont get any ideas.. )

Darien, i commented...

"I am not myself
Dear Diary
The Hero in this Murder
The Game's we play
Guilt Trip"

... of yours. lol.
And i didn't get any idea's... much =P

Lol.. I'm only kidding..

They are just titles.. You could use one of my titles and the poem be something completely different..
so if you have any ideas from titles you have read of mine.. be my guest and use it to the fullest..

I'm not trying to restrict you from your talent.. lol
I'm just being a butt : P