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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Hey everyone..

    Read any of my poems, and I'll return the favour on two of your poems. The more you read, the more I read. Just leave me your titles, and I'll get back to your as soon as I can.

    thanks :)

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  • Carmen
    19 years ago

    done! (i read 2) they were beautiful

    1) angry temptations
    2) without
    3) this star
    4) shut up

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Carmen.. done!

    anyone else?
    .. srry it took a while

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Ok.. I did two of yours..
    and don't be angry with my comments..

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Lol.. ok

    I'll just leave you comments.. i dont vote for them
    I feel bad :/ lol

    and all of my words do rhyme..
    the rhyme scheme is the last two lines of
    every stanza rhymes..

    rhymes are similar sound.. doesnt have to be exact

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  • Edward D Zurovec
    19 years ago

    Done THE HERO IN THIS MURDER

    WOE

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Done!.. thanks :)

    anyone else?

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  • Brittany C
    19 years ago

    Ok I have just read 3 more of your poems. So could you pleas read any of my poems + Locked Heart.

    Thanks ahead of time;)

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  • ellewen
    19 years ago

    read which ever of mine catch your eye, or if you want me to be specific then choose ones that dont have as many comments.

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    ok cool, I'll be right on those!

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  • Hopeless Romantic
    19 years ago

    r/r/c any of mine you choose. I will read a few of yours. Thanks m8.
    Mike

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    ^^ Sweet!

    MY1&only

    done!.. thanks for reading :)

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  • Hopeless Romantic
    19 years ago

    My 1 and only? Is that the title of one of yours you want me to read?

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  • Brian
    19 years ago

    I r/r/c on "Hero in this Murder" . I liked it very much! Great work.

    Could you please r/r/c/ "Petel les rose" and "My Hell" Please?
    Thanks

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    ohhh sorry.. no .
    its was another poet I was thanking.. sorry

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Fire-lilly

    thanks! I'm done :)

    SXE~Skittl3z

    also done!

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Ok done everyone!!..
    Thanks!..

    anyone else?..

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  • latin girl
    19 years ago

    I read two read
    11 please

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Ok thanks latin girl.

    Really liked '11'..

    anyone else?

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    anyone?..

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  • Idiosyncratic
    19 years ago

    I did two, could you please do:

    The Future of a god
    An Uneven Cry
    The Ballad of Lost Hopes
    Prelude to Extinction

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Unidentified

    I had already done "Prelude to Extinction",
    so I did "let's heaven here" instead.

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