Fried bread and a broken heart

  • Tiny Reader
    19 years ago

    Please comment my poem. Only vote if you are willing to be honest. Comments will be returned.

  • Synh
    19 years ago

    I'll take a look at it but only if you comment HONESTLY WITH NO ONE LINERS ON MY NEW POEM CALLED 'From Night To Day'

  • Brittany C
    19 years ago

    Great poems I went ahead and r/r/c two of your poems.

    Please return the favor.

    thanks:)

  • Tiny Reader
    19 years ago

    Done :)

  • Normal is the Watchword
    19 years ago

    My two newest please