Name Contest

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I've noticed that a lot of people on here have interesting net names. And I thought it would be cool if you would use your name in a poem. If you don't have a symbolic name but would still like to join then you can use my name ( if it appeals to you ) or if you have another idea that I approve of you can use that too.

Rules:
1) NO PROFANITY!
2) Must Rhyme
3) Be creative and have fun!!! : )

I will start out posting the deadline at Dec. 11th (one week) but if I need to wait for more reserves I have no problem doing so.
Have fun!!!

Awards:
1st place: 7 comments
2nd place: 5 comments
3rd place: 3 comments

Reserves:
xhello.killer.please.kill.elmox
>liquid dreams
Gemma

Done:
ѕ¢αяℓєт.ℓιρѕ ♥
CharismaticCountryGirl
HiddenxSoul
Absolute Sorrow
Ciao ♥
*¤TheJohnston¤*
Lush.Fcuk-*
Lauren:x♥x
[Baby]Blue[Baby]Blanky
~*Who Cares?*~

reserve!

Absolutely! Looking forward to it!

Okay, in honesty, my name CharismaticCountryGirl wouldn't really make for a deep poem if I used it in it. So could I do a poem about why I chose it instead? If not, then I'll just use your name. No biggie either way.
Charisma*
P.S. or even use Charisma the name I sign off with.

can it be an old poem or does it have to be new...u didnt say

Reserve me a spot please. (:

-Jenna.

reserve me a spot as well please :)

It can be any poem that hasn't previously been used in a different contest.

I think you should either use my name or you should use Charisma ( personally that's what I'd choose )

could i do it but possibly use my old name
*Concealedinaddiction*
Because my name now doesnt really leave me with much to write about.

Okay, then reserve me a spot with the name Charisma. Thanks! Oh yeah, quick question, does the poem have to be about why we chose it? or does it just have to be about our name in general, like whatever?
Charisma*

To use your old name is perfectly fine. And it sounds like it's going to be an interesting poem too! Looking forward to it!

Ok I changed my mind...you can use any old poem if you want to. Sry for the confusion!

Ok the poem doesn't have be anything about your name...it just has to have your name in it. So your's could be about anything as long as you describe something or someone using the term charisma. Understand?

thanks for that! I was so confuzzed. lol looking forward to it.
Charisma*

.Scarlet.Lips.

On this pitch black night
A shrieking cry is heard
The pale creature
Emerges from the shadows
And licks her scarlet lips..

Eyes black like coal
Gleefully shining with
The urge to kill..
Painfully straight ebony hair
Falls over the colorless face
And sharp teeth protrude from
Those blood red lips..

The terrifying creature
Carefully chooses her prey
Then pounces upon them
Slowly sticking her jagged fangs
Into the neck
And licking the scarlet blood
That runs from the bite..

But as the sun slowly starts to rise
The immortal creature
Hisses with anger
As tiny clouds of smoke
Rise from her departed body..

She darts off into the horizon
To come back
When all is shadowy and quiet
To once again haunt the night..

This is a really good idea.

Please reserve a spot for me. =]

A Hidden Soul {Parquette}
by HiddenxSoul

A hidden soul is her recipe
To heal her from her broken wounds and hurt
If she does not speak, and hides away from everything
The heart can be whole, along with her dignity

A hidden soul is her recipe
To bury the hurt under her delicate shirt
She wishes she was a bird, with big flapping wings
Ruining her enemies and burying them in dirt

A hidden soul is her recipe
To escape the nightmares, and scary happenings
Why couldn’t she just have ignored his harmful flirts
Before things got harmful, and aggravating?

A hidden soul is her recipe
To heal her from her broken wounds and hurt
If she keeps on hiding from everything
Then she can get through absolutely anything

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A Parquette has four stanzas, each containing four lines. The first line of the poem is repeated in every stanza as the first line. Each line, except the first, has 10-12 syllables. The rhyme scheme is: "abcaabcbacbcabcc".

Oh yeah, and this is my first ever Parquette.

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I love these contests!
I used to be xx hopeless romantic xx I had written a poem using that, so I hope it's okay!!

Hopelessly Romantic [Lyrics]
by Ciao ♥

[Chorus]
Hopelessly romantic,
Feeling kinda frantic,
Baby, what am I supposed to do,
Now that we're finally through?

[Verse 1]
Baby, what we had was so special;
No one can deny that.
But now that it's over,
I can't help but to keep looking back.

[Chorus]
Hopelessly romantic,
Feeling kinda frantic,
Baby, what am I supposed to do,
Now that we're finally through?

[Verse 2]
Honey, what happened to our love?
Did you just not care anymore?
Baby, you were my everything!
Stop closing the god damn door!

[Chorus]
Hopelessly romantic,
Feeling kinda frantic,
Baby, what am I supposed to do,
Now that we're finally through?

[Bridge]
Sweetie, please don't do this to me!
In our love, can't you believe?
Now that it's over, is there no regrets?
In our love, I couldn't forget.

[Outro]
Hopelessly romantic,
I'm feeling kinda frantic.
Now that we're finally through
There's no way I'm getting over you?

Hopelessy romantic,
Baby, you're making me so damn frantic!
Why are you doing this to me?
Why can't you just let me be!

Ciao xx

Charisma*

Drawn to her innocence and childish charm
Young at heart, in soul, and mind
Words that fall with seeming grace
As she flirts with humor so refined

As if she never has to try, they come
To catch the expressions she shares
And though a crowd is at her feet
She walks without a worry or care

What does she have that I don't possess?
Some inner beauty I cannot explain.
Wish I could grab hold of its power
And my own unique appeal gain

To have for a moment what she has forever
The presence you can't push aside
Caught up because of such sweet charisma
Leaving you wonder you cannot deny

But I'll sit here with words written all down
Once again, based upon this girl
I've got charisma in my own poetry
But it's left unspoken to this world

By: Charisma*
very fun!

Absolute Sorrow (Acrostic)
Bryan

An angel sent from up above,
Bruised my heart and my love.
Sorrow is left, all that I feel,
Open wounds that can never heal.
Left alone, nothing but hate,
Unique position given by fate.
Take my heart and go where you belong,
Evil angel who did me wrong.

Same angel who said she loved me,
Opened my eyes when I couldnt see.
Ran with my heart, smile on her face,
Ripped me apart, left me in this horrible place.
Old wounds still bleed, I dont know how,
Where she lays is where my sorrow rests now.

I want to do it! Count me in...

Ooh, Hidden Soul, I lovee your poemm! =]]

WOW! absolute sorrow, that's a great poem!
Charisma*

Aww, thanks ѕ¢αяℓєт.ℓιρѕ ♥ =] I really like yours, too.

Edit~~~

Hey There... This is Thejohnston.
but i changed my name AGAIN.
And well... this is my Concealedinaddiction name.
Hope you like it...

ConCealedInAddiction;;

You’ve Got Me Where You Want,
And Once Again I’m Begging; Pleading.
Upon My Knees An Grieving,
And Once Again I’m Suffering; Bleeding.

Desperate For Your Touch,
In Need Of Your Perfection; Affection.
Drowned From The Pain In My Heart,
Surrounded By Rejection; Infection.

Perceived In The Meaning Of Hate,
Deprived Of Ones Attraction; Reaction.
Despised By The Meaningless,
And Seduced By Lies Distraction; Satisfaction.

Deceiving The Lives Of Others,
Flirting With The Threat; Regret.
Waiting To Lose Control,
And Simply Cry Upset; Forget.

Stepped Upon Self Consciously,
Losing all self control; stole.
Everything Seems So Much Harder Now,
With No One To Extol; Console.

So I Will Ponder Your Return,
And Wait For Your Call; Crawl.
Hypnotized By Your Appearance,
Infatuated I’ll Fall; Recall.

Concealed In Addiction,
Proclaimed To Say Goodbye; Implied.
Left To Find The Pieces,
Lost And You Don’t Know Why; Denied.

You guys are doing so excellent. I can't wait to judge them all. Oh and I decided that even if you don't place I'll still give everyone who enters one comment each on a poem of there's. Hope you keep up all the great poems!

Hollywood Barbie.

H earts beating with a silver light beaming down
O n her. Draped in pearls and a silver gown
L aced with deceit from all the things she's done in love.
L ullabies whispered in her ear under the midnight sun of
Y esterday's mistakes. Her legs are going
W eak and there's nowhere else to run. Her heart's showing
O ver her sleeve. With a dagger in her back she falls -
O wing it all to you. A Silhouette on the moon-cast walls
D ances in angst. Her teenage ways had got the best of you.

B aby, you are a heartbreaker set in your ways,
A nd I am sick of having a part in this play.
R eality is setting in and I am plastic to all I knew
B efore. My blackened red heart is draped in blue
I ce and my breath smells of liquor. So for the last time
E verything is not alright in my mind.

© Jenna Elphick
December 7, 2006

--I wrote about my other screen name on here, but I will probably write a new one because I don't like this one. I will let you know if I change it. --

-Jenna.

HURRY! Only 3 more days! Keep up all the excellent poems...they're really fun to read. And they are all so great!

Jenna, I love yours!!! ♥♥

Ciao xx

Lol, awe thanks Hunn. -blushes-

-Jenna.

To the ppl who are still reserved but haven't done anything yet....if you're going to be longer than monday I just need to know so that I don't judge without yah. Again, I have no problem waiting. But I need to know whether or not to wait or I'm just gonna judge it on Monday, thanks!

haha i will write it about now.
tehe

sry- i forgot about this contest. -blush-

-/2 Terra

Can i reserve a spot if i have it in by Monday? x

It's absolutely no problem Baby Blue...that's why I reminded everyone. And absolutely Gemma, I'd love to have you join!

ohkay well... my sisters boyfriend is coming over... ugh :sickness: so i will write it after he gets here.

well this name i chose from... a bit ago... well a few years ago when i was like this.. so

Baby Blue Baby Blanky

Another night
With the black and blue aura
Flowing from my secret heart

Another tear
With the sapphire crystals
Staining my porcelain cheeks

And what is to show of this horrific pain
But this sweet little baby blue baby blanky
With blemishes of stains shattering the peace

Another scream
Crashes through the emptiness
Of a house no longer of laughter

Another drip
Of my deep crimson blood
Trickles to the dusty floorboards

And what is to show of this horrific pain
But this sweet little baby blue baby blanky
With blemishes of stains shattering the peace

Another prayer
Flows from my cerise, delicate lips
As my looks towards the heavens

For another night
With the black and blue aura
Flowing from my secret heart

Only the hopes of laughter, and happiness
Keep me alive, and fighting for another day
For the reminisce of my peaceful child hood
Flows through the touch of this, baby blue baby blanky

Well if htis doesnt have to be new, here is one with my previous s/n on here..

Random_Insanity
by Lauren:x.x

I see the blood pouring all over my face
i watch from above in a cold silent daze

this sickening darkness has smoldered my soul
leaving me sad, and hopeless, I'm alone

i scream for someone, and i cry out loud
then something strange, happens to everything around

my bloody body has vanished from sight
and no longer do i have painful deep fright

now i'm by my normal house, in my own family-filled backyard
but no one has given me even the slightest regard

i begin to cry out loud and uncontrollably sob
then my darkened mind begins to pound and throb

now im back in that pitch black room
and i recognize this is now my doom

my bloody body, friends, and family,
are the only thing that i can see
and so i call, no i scream to you,
you caused this Random Insanity

wait i want to do it....am i too late? if not can i reserve?