Very Good Deal!

If people could please read one of my earlier poems and one of my latest poems and tell me if I have improved on my writing and why, or if I haven't and how I could do so.

In return I will comment eight of your poems.

Leave me the titles here, i don't like fishing.

I will only comment the poems if you do what I asked.
I don't want comments on the poems in question, but if my writing has improved.

Thank you.
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I read, rated, and commented on "I Want To Cut." && "The Body"
You did an excellent job on both of them =].

Please do the following of mine:
Hold On, Move Along [Lyrics]
She's Bleeding
What About Now?
Hiding Away
Hiding From The World

I read, rated and commented on, "For A Certain Someone" and "Confused?"

Both being love poems, for that is what my strong point is, I write mostly love poems.

Yes, you have Progressed, I could tell right away, you learned and you applied what you learned, I can tell, Great Job on both poems.

Can you please do:

For You My Love
Dreams (Acrostic)
An Intense Attraction (Rondelet)
Romance At a Glance (Monorhyme)
Maybe It's You (Terzanelle)
Passion within
If you were...
The Photo of You

Thank you, Joe

I rrc lots lol and i think you wrote great the whole time. . . thanks for rrcing my poems

All done.
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Anyone else?
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Done.

CLOSED.

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