My Abominable Memories (1 for 2)

Hey guys,
Just put up this poem, id really appreciate some feedback on it. I want HONEST oppinions, so you know if you dont like it please tell me why and ill try and improve. Please no one liners.
In return ill do two of your poems, if you want a pacific one done please leave titles.
Thanks in advance, ill get to your ASAP.
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Anyone? Im in the commenting mood.

No one? :(

did it

Done yours.
What did you mean by "Yes this poem could be alil above some people" ??
Sorry i didnt fully undersatand you there.
Thanks for the comment anyway,
xx

i'll check yours out, if you could do any of my featured poems. thanks so much!!

i think she meant that your poem could be too complicated or intelligent or metaphorical for some people to understand.

Mousie i just did yours. Snugglez ill do your poems later today ok?
Thanks for the comments they mean alot to me! :)

Lauren:x♥x - Hmm... I'm trying to improve my vocab to include more complicated words and stuff. So this is my first try writing like this.

Anyone else?
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Snugglez

Just finished both of yours. :)
Keep up teh great work people!

Anyone else?

Done :)
Nice...

Anyone else?
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K, i commented on two of them. Why dont you want me to vote? (Dont worry i havent). There were both excellent!

Anyone else?

Oh right, yeah they usually get downvoted after they appear on that.
Thanks for your comment. :)

So anyone else in?