"The rest is history" and "Just Smile instead"

hi,
my two newest poems need some commented, i would be truly grateful if you could comment on them

"The rest is history" is a love poem about love, that is portrayed in a scrapbook but all you see is the sadness of the romance and not the love and happiness.

"Just Smile Instead" is an inspirational poem about being strong and happy and about how I am always around for people who need to talk.

I WILL ALWAYS RETURN THE FAVOUR ASAP
love Tara-Kay

sounds kewl, i'll check it out... could you do "The Night" and then any other ones you wanna... thanks so much!

hey, you'll see in the comment how i had an idea of what the first poem might be about, but it turned out totally different... i hope you don't mind, i took the idea i got from your poem and the picture i had had in my head and made a poem, i think it's completely different though... check it out, it's my latest, and if you have a problem with it i'll take it off, i just thought it was a wonderful idea.