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`The Downfall of Our Love
If you r/r/c it... I'll do 3 of yours!

Any constructive criticism is GREATLY appreciated!

I'm in

I commented on your poem it was excellent, you can choose any 3 of mine in the featured section thanks. Karl Wild

yeah i'll do it... could you do my one i wrote today (Pages of Lost Memories) and The Music That We Play and The Night?? thanks so much!

i just did it, and i really had nothing bad to say about it, you don't need criticism! i really think you have a talent for writing, and your usage of the vocab made it so sophisticated and so much more dramatic... i really enjoyed your poem.

Thank you for your comments and kind words! :)

Mousie: I had already commented on The Music That We Play and The Night.. So I did two others instead.. I hope that you do not mind :)

Anybody else?

MY1&only: Done :) It was probably hard finding 3 I hadn't commented on yet since I've done almost all of yours lol

Anyone else?

I'll comment, but in the 3 you do, could u plz comment and rate Viva la revolution?? PLZ
xoxo

Done :)

Anyone else?

Done,

My Abominable Memories
Let Death Take You
Snow children

Thanks :)

Contemplating_Suicide: I commented on My Abominable Memories, but I have already commented on the other two. Is there any other specific ones you would like me to comment on?

Oh right... erm...
A part of death
And...
Just for me...

Hope you havent commented those. Thanks for your comment by the way.
xx

Ok.. I commented on "Just for Me" but I had already commented on "A Part of Death". lol. So I looked through all of your poems and found only one that I hadn't commented on yet so I did that one. I have now officially commented on all of your poems. lol.

Anyone else?

Lol, thanks! All my poems... lol.