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  • Bridgette
    19 years ago

    `The Downfall of Our Love
    If you r/r/c it... I'll do 3 of yours!

    Any constructive criticism is GREATLY appreciated!

  • Karl Wild GG23
    19 years ago

    I'm in

  • Karl Wild GG23
    19 years ago

    I commented on your poem it was excellent, you can choose any 3 of mine in the featured section thanks. Karl Wild

  • Mousie
    19 years ago

    yeah i'll do it... could you do my one i wrote today (Pages of Lost Memories) and The Music That We Play and The Night?? thanks so much!

  • Mousie
    19 years ago

    i just did it, and i really had nothing bad to say about it, you don't need criticism! i really think you have a talent for writing, and your usage of the vocab made it so sophisticated and so much more dramatic... i really enjoyed your poem.

  • Bridgette
    19 years ago

    Thank you for your comments and kind words! :)

    Mousie: I had already commented on The Music That We Play and The Night.. So I did two others instead.. I hope that you do not mind :)

    Anybody else?

  • Bridgette
    19 years ago

    MY1&only: Done :) It was probably hard finding 3 I hadn't commented on yet since I've done almost all of yours lol

    Anyone else?

  • Lady Vengeance
    19 years ago

    I'll comment, but in the 3 you do, could u plz comment and rate Viva la revolution?? PLZ
    xoxo

  • Bridgette
    19 years ago

    Done :)

    Anyone else?

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Done,

    My Abominable Memories
    Let Death Take You
    Snow children

    Thanks :)

  • Bridgette
    19 years ago

    Contemplating_Suicide: I commented on My Abominable Memories, but I have already commented on the other two. Is there any other specific ones you would like me to comment on?

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Oh right... erm...
    A part of death
    And...
    Just for me...

    Hope you havent commented those. Thanks for your comment by the way.
    xx

  • Bridgette
    19 years ago

    Ok.. I commented on "Just for Me" but I had already commented on "A Part of Death". lol. So I looked through all of your poems and found only one that I hadn't commented on yet so I did that one. I have now officially commented on all of your poems. lol.

    Anyone else?

  • Simple Sensation
    19 years ago

    Lol, thanks! All my poems... lol.