first time..

hii ppl!! im sort of new here and im wondering if you can read my poems and/or quotes. any comments or ratings. i juss recently started making poems so any advice is good even if it hurts, ehehhe. if i deserve the pain then ok ^^. its for the good ^^. thanks soo much!! i'll try to return the favor if i can figure out who comments and/or rates ^^. thanks much!!