Perfecting Our Poetry

I dont really want votes, I'm rather going for comments. Since you seem confident with your criticizm, can you read my "Red Rose to Black" poem? Its actually my favorite so I'm wanting alot of people to give good judgements on it. Thanks~

--Bryce~

PS. Feel free to bash it all you think nessisary, but please dont totally kill it o.o;;

Mario

Hi- Can you please comment on my "if only..." poem. I would appreciate it. Thankyou!

KT

An impious night (2 Rondels)
Does the dead know that they are dead? (VIRELAY)
Tear drops of Pain(Sestina)

Can you check these poems, if u have enough time? OR anything of your choice..
I will be happy to read some constructive criticisms...

These are not my favorite poems.. But these are some poems which i feel that it is missing something...
A different view may help...

Thanks in advance... And I appreciate what you are doing.

Take care. Bye. Trincy.

Hi :D Could you possible check out my poems "Destruction" and "Curse"? They're my two newest ones.

Thanks heaps!

xox, PorteR

hey do u ind reading all of mine i wood really like it if u gve me sum advice or sumfing