New Poem: "The Stranger" [2 for 1]

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Hey everyone,

    I have a new poem out called "The Stranger". If you read my poem, and comment on it, I will do the same for you on two of your poems.

    If you read and comment, I will read and comment,
    if you vote, I'll vote. Suggestions are welcome.

    Two of your poems, for one of mine!

    Thanks,
    Darien

  • Brittany C
    19 years ago

    Done, please r/r/c my two new poems

    thanks

  • *Wishes do come true*
    19 years ago

    Done it was good!

    Please read rate anod comment 2 of my poems! thanks

  • Sweet lig
    19 years ago

    its done and i return the favor thns

  • Allison
    19 years ago

    Done.....

    You can read any two of mine that you want.

    Alyson

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Thanks everyone!
    I'm done..

    Anyone else?..

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Debbie!!! Thanks for the great comment, and I definitely let that word slip by me! I can't read this poem at work (because it's a love poem) but when I get home, I will read it!! and I will also read another one! .. and you can't stop me! hehe :D

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    I'm sort of curious..

    I wanna read that one.. but I did the Acrostic instead.. but I will read those two when I get home!

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Debbie!! They were lovely!

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Ohhh, I understand. It's because you don't want it to get popular, and have those jerks rate it poorly.
    It really does suck how people get jealous at good poetry.

    And reading your poetry is always a good deal for me! Lol

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    ahaha, I forgot about this thread..

    the deal is definitely still on! I'm bringing it back to life! Come on peoples!!!