Agony all favors return

good eve my fellow poet's please rrc my new poem Agony and ill return the favor you can also do my other poem if you want then just tell me the title of your poem which you like me to comment on

Done, and that was a ver sad poem..

anyone else???

"Whispers and Words", please. It's a little longer, but it's not too much agony to go through if you just read it without stopping. It flows alright, I do believe.

If you don't want to do one that long, though, you may pick any of them. I've been downrated recently...kind of sad. Ah, well, thank you and have a nice day. (And good poem, by the way.)

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Sure! Um.. can you do ''Foolish, that's me'' it's not one of my best. But I'm trying to get a message out! THANKS!

Done anyone else???