2 for 1!!

it's my first attempt at lyrics, and i would like some input on them, so if you r/r/c my latest three i'll do 2 for every one you do!!! thanks so much guys, i'd really appreciate it!!!

titles:
I Sing My Song(Lyrics)
Two Best Friends(Lyrics)

I read the song.. 'I Sing My Song'

I did not find the other one 'The One of You and Me', but I liked the title. And that last one, well
I can't read love poems at my work computer..

but what I read, you're off to a good start.

sry about the other poem, i took that off after i had posted it, someone gave me a 1 and i really didn't like it that much anyways, i had no tune for it. thank you so much for the suggestions, i realized i had made a typo in the chrous, it was supposed to be "Who I am and where I am...", i ended up taking out the and like you said, i tried it with the melody and i liked it... if you get the chance like when you're at home or something to check out the other one Two Best Friends, i really like that one, and i love the tune, it's a xmas present for my b/f. so if you are at home or somewhere else and you can check it out, thanks so much, if not, that's fine, the suggestions on the other one are greatly appreciated!!! i'll check out some of yours.