10 for 10

hi, i'm willing to comment on any 10 of your poems - you may request which - IF, you VOTE AND COMMENT- OR COMMENT on my poems- 10 of them, you can comment only - but plz dont just vote.

First 2

(oh and plz, real comment - suggestions and all that...)

all done dear - and it was a pleasure! oh, and every change you suggested is being done! thanx! check them out in a week or so?

done - kristen and steve

steve - any spesifics you would like comment on?

thanx!

lol it doesnt matter i was just curious to read your work because your from south africa and i was wondering about the differences there might be