Need c/c/r on my latest poem :)

It's a sad poem about the distance between two people, though read it yourself, I won't be senf centered but I think it is a nice poem...
Thanks from mark, Denmark

done... it was so sad... pls... if you got time... r/r/c on my latest two... or at least one of them... thx...

Death Behind the Mask and Knife
The Faded Light

~angel~