Feedback on "Love Letter"

I would like it if I could get some feedback on this poem. The poem is written with 6 words in each sentence and it is something I wrote out of what I felt. I haven't gotten to reviewing and stuff yet. So before I start I would like to know what you think and if you have some ideas. Thank you very much!

Love Letter

I lay in my queen-size bed
The music playing in my ear
Soon the darkness around consumes me
Letting me peacefully dream of you

I wake up with a smile
The thoughts of you still linger
The sweet smile I always liked
And eyes so deep and blue

The world around comes into focus
I am startled by my feelings
We have always been good friends
With our tricky games of cat-mouse

I used to sting you hard
My words sharper than a sword
You would respond without any doubt
With the same sting of words

While people wonder if weâ??re sane
We knew it was a game
It was always just joking around
Nothing other than a harmless game

I feel my heart breaking apart
Being far far away from you
We are parted by an ocean
For another couple of long months

I just want to come home
To see you and tell you
How I felt being far away
Tell you that I love you
More than anyone or anything else

Love Tone